From 3:55 to the end I liked more than the beginning. In my opinion, that was more of your personality and you were blunt and didn't seem as nervous as you seemed in the first 3:54. 3:55 and on involves a lot of unique humor which I like. "Ya got a nerd, that doesn't mean ya got a quarterback" and the Chad Pennington comparison, I lol'ed at those two things. Overall great job Bobby and I guess my only suggestion is to just not try to sound so professional and just let your personality show.
The great thing about free advise is that it's free. I have read your bio, watched all of the postings, read all the comments and now trying to figure out who the audience is. Is it other college students, family, friends, industry, or you? Every blog entry has some great insight moments, and some obvious humor to those that know you find enlightening. Progressively, from the 1st to the 2nd, great tuning. From 2nd-4th, it's a bit confusing. There is HUGE opportunity to tune your writing skills, find your comfort in front of the camera and knock this out of the park w/social media via Ping, Klout, and other rankings...but what is your audience? What is the image of Bobby? What makes you memorable? It's the biggest question in the industry...was he/she memorable? You're kinda making ME work for for the answer. It's a career killing question. Again, free advice
From 3:55 to the end I liked more than the beginning. In my opinion, that was more of your personality and you were blunt and didn't seem as nervous as you seemed in the first 3:54. 3:55 and on involves a lot of unique humor which I like. "Ya got a nerd, that doesn't mean ya got a quarterback" and the Chad Pennington comparison, I lol'ed at those two things. Overall great job Bobby and I guess my only suggestion is to just not try to sound so professional and just let your personality show.
ReplyDeleteThe great thing about free advise is that it's free. I have read your bio, watched all of the postings, read all the comments and now trying to figure out who the audience is. Is it other college students, family, friends, industry, or you? Every blog entry has some great insight moments, and some obvious humor to those that know you find enlightening. Progressively, from the 1st to the 2nd, great tuning. From 2nd-4th, it's a bit confusing. There is HUGE opportunity to tune your writing skills, find your comfort in front of the camera and knock this out of the park w/social media via Ping, Klout, and other rankings...but what is your audience? What is the image of Bobby? What makes you memorable? It's the biggest question in the industry...was he/she memorable? You're kinda making ME work for for the answer. It's a career killing question. Again, free advice
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